Thursday, 24 September 2015

Pohutukawa Group - Letter to Mrs Irvine - Persuasive Writing

Tuesday 8th September 2015
WALHT write a letter to persuade someone.
SC :
-Opinion
-Three reasons
-Conclusion
-Strong vocabulary


Dear Miss Irvine,
I strongly believe we should all have a chromebook each to ourselves.


My first reason is that if we have a chromebook we will not need to buy any pencils or stationary.This will save us lots of money that we can put towards buying the chromes. It will also save us precious time we waste on looking for pencils.  


We feel  that if we work on chromebooks, we will be able to work from home too. When we are sick we will be  able to catch up on our work  from home.This will help us to keep up with the classroom learning.


Mrs Irvine, if you agree to buy chromebooks for all us, we can help too.
We can help by fundraising for the chromebooks for our class.
We can organise a garage sale or a bake sale to help raise the money


Lastly we feel that we can use the chromebooks to do lots of research. We will be able to finish or work on time.At the moment we have to wait four our turn on to go on the computers or chromebooks. Do you agree with us, Mrs Irvine ? If you do , then please consider our request. We hope you will buy chromes for all of us soon.




FROM: POHUTUKAWA GROUP E2

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